Question

We are very proud of our school we would like to give you a glimpse into the academic lives of our students.(What is the the best way to correct this sentence?)

Answer 1

Answer:

You could add futher punctuation and contractions. This sentence isn't grammatically correct either, as it's missing a conjuction.

Explanation:

We're very proud of our school, and we would like to give you a glimpse into the acedemic lives of our students.

You could also write the sentence without the conjuction, but it would have to be broken up into two separate thoughts.

Ex: We are very proud of our school. We would like to give you a glimple into the acedemic lives of our students

Answer 2

Answer: You could add futher punctuation and contractions. This is not a correct sentence. It is missing a contraction.