Question

When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear? changing "her sister" to "the girl" changing "she" to "Breanna" changing "Breanna" to "she" changing "flour" to "it"

Answer 1

I’m not sure but I would say changing “she” to “Breanna” because in that sentence it’s hard to tell if “she” means Breanna or her sister

Answer 2

Answer:

Changing “she” to Brenna

Explanation:

Because the sentence refers to both Brenna and her sister the reader does not know who “she” is