Question

Read the sentence. I take dance classes after school I want to be a ballerina.

Which revision most effectively corrects the fused sentence?

A. I want to be a ballerina, therefore I take dance classes after school.

B. I take dance classes after school, I want to be a ballerina.

C. I take dance classes after school because I want to be a ballerina.

D. I want to be a ballerina taking dance classes after school.

Answer 1

Answer:

The right answer is C.

Explanation:

"Because" is the best conjunction to link both ideas.

Answer 2

Answer:

I take dance classes after school I want to be a ballerina.

Explanation:

Inserting the subordinating conjunction because corrects the fused sentence by forming a complex sentence.