Answer:
1) While you re t the store, please get flour, sugar, eggs and milk 2 make brownies.
(no comma after and) because "and" means u don't need a comma. 2 take the tr
2). Dear Mr. Andrews,
this is a salutation, only comma is after the name.
3). Todays' practice; First, warm up, second: drills.Third, scrimmage, then cool down.
4)."Don't 4get to take the trash out!" Mom called, as we left 4 school.
5). First, go to the bank, then to the store. After that, get some lunch.
Too many commas made this a "run-on" sentence.
6). Timothy asked, "can we go to the fair this year?"
7). The best part of the trip was going skiing. I enjoyed sledding, as well.
8). Mrs. Taylor, the English Techer, sponsors the debate club.
(adding the word "also," makes the sentence too long).
9). While we are traveling, my neighbors, will take care of the dogs.'
10). Alice went to Six Flags, she also went to the Water Park.