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GRAMMAR PLZ When we were coming home I saw a couple tornados, But we weren’t inside of them.
We drove near Ohio and bought a couple of fireworks, When we got home we popped almost off of them it was super fun. I was hoping we can maybe stop by Idaho on our way back, But there wasn’t really much time we can do that. I was really lucky to see some shooting stars or UFOs it was awesome! It really caught my eye. Maybe I was hoping to get abducted so I can get about a million dollars from the government, But that didn’t happen... I’m still waiting. When we got home we went camping, with my whole church.
I saw some bear poop and we heard a cougar scream, And I ain’t taking about a Woman.
Had fun and I’m hoping we go out again like we did.

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Answer:d There was only a couple of problems grammar wise. I went in and changed some words and phrases.

Explanation:

When we were coming home I saw a couple of tornados, but we weren’t inside of them.

We stopped near Ohio and bought a couple of fireworks, When we got home we popped almost all of them it was pure enjoyment. I was hoping we can maybe stop by Idaho on our way back, but there wasn’t much time for us to do that.  Then beauty caught my eye. I saw some shooting stars or UFOs it was awesome! Maybe I was hoping to get abducted, so I can get about a million dollars from the government, but that didn’t happen, I’m still waiting. After all that traveling we went back home just to go back to the outdoors with my fellow worshipers.

During our excursions, we saw bear dropping. We even hear a cougar scream, by the way, it wasn't a woman.

Plenty of memories were shared and I suppose we can do it again.