Answer: pls give me brainiest i need it :(
Explanation: here is language errors which i identified. few i did mentioned. i think you are writing a poem about the miseries your people suffered. i have changed the language but the essence remains the same. hope you like it as the brainiest. the poem goes as:
living in a dangerous time
being Jew is a crime (a, is used for singular objects, and jew is itself not singular it represent a nation )
as the Nazis began to invade
Jews began to fade( Jew itself represent a religion so you do not write as what you have written in the original text)
camps were tortured and sounded with gun
loved ones were shot, who run for life
no hope, no life and no food
hopelessness prevailed, when the soldiers got out of their mind
war came to an end, Hitlers philosophy ruined many
Jews got freedom, yet the faithful survived
nightmares and horror remain, and losses can not be repaired
costs are high, money can't revive the perished one
