Question

Using your own words, try your best to re-write these sentences. They can be re-written in many different ways.

1. Due to the pressure that society puts on children too much too soon to become successful by their standards, some children fail because of the pressure which they bare is too much for them, in a world they are not ready for.

2. Most of the speech students there seemed disinterested as I looked throughout the audience with few exceptions.

3. Everyone has weaknesses, including myself, more than I could count on my hands, whether they be large or small.

4. In other words, I feel our experiences are judges on second level with the knowledge and brain density it stands in judgment before.

5. My responsibility stems from horses which have been a great attribute in much of my development.

Answer 1

1) Referable to the insistence that society places on children too much too shortly to become successful by their standards, some children go wrong because of the pressure which they bare is too much for them, in a world they are not ready for.

2) Many speech students there seemed disinterested as I attended throughout the audience with few exclusions.

3) Every person has weaknesses, including myself, more than I could reckon on my hands, whether they be big or modest.

4) In other language, I feel our experiences are judged on second level with the knowledge and brain density it stands in judgment before.

5) My work is stems from horses which have been a great attribute in much of my growth.