Question

It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer.

Write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors.

Answer 1

To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word August should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. Finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which I love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers.

Answer 2

An error is considered as the mistake that is inaccurate. On the other hand we can say that it is the difference between actual value and computed value.

In order to edit this paragraph, the writer can do following modifications.

• The writer use the comma between hot and dry as they are coordinate with each other.

• Secondly, The month that is August should be written in capitalized form., but the summer and north need not to be written in capital form.

• Lastly, In order to avoid confusion, the author should use a serial comma in the list and also try to set it off with a pair of commas.

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