I believe if the answer to "Which revision would be the BEST improvement of this sentence from paragraph 2?" can't be "D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history." because it is eliminated so it would be ...... "C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history."
I say that "C" is the answer because it is the one to be more informational and is true.
A. Transportation by a raft is a symbolic role in the evolution of local history of transportation.
B. The transportation by a raft as a role of traveling is symbolic of the evolution of local history.
C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history.
D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history.
Answer:
Yeah its C, read it a little more carefully and look at the answers and you should see it.
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