Question

Can anyone help me do a hook for "NETHERGRAVE" im going to put a summary here
(((This is a story about a lonely boy, neglected by his parents, abandoned by his friends, who is chatting to his friends online, and when he logs off, they all leave him. He feels even more lonely, so he finds this game called Nethergrave, and gets sucked into the game and abandons real world. The story deals with his adventures in the game and decisions whether he should return to the real world, or stay in the game forever.)))))<< summary, im doing a critical essay and i need help with my outline

Answer 1

How to Write a Critical Essay (Because telling you this way seems a bit easier and might be helpful)

1. Develop your thesis.

    2. Develop a rough outline based on your research notes.

• So basically write down notes from the story you think are really important from the story.

     3. Begin your essay with an engaging sentence that gets right into your topic.  

• aka the hook

     4. Provide background information to help guide your readers.  

• Like how you talked about him having no friends and the only ones he had were online friends and were about to leave him, and his basically nonexistent relationship with his parents.

     5. Use your body paragraphs to discuss specific components of your text.

• 1st paragraph - Like the theme
• 2nd paragraph - why it fits as a science fiction book
• 3rd paragraph - And then maybe have this be about imagery or characterization or mood/tone of the story (something like that)

      6. Now it's time for the conclusion which is basically tying up all of your main ideas into this paragraph.

Another great thing to do is to add quotes from the story that support what your talking about.