Question

HELP PLEASE!!!

(So I'm writing a song, this is what I have so far;)

Why do I feel this way?
Why can't I think straight?
Everybody tells me what they think,
But I've stopped listening,

I- I'll get back to you,
When I figure out the truth,
'Cause apperently nobody wants to give me,
The information I need,

So I'll just let it go,
Snooze all the sirens-

(I'm not sure what I should put after "sirens")

Answer 1

Answer:

is there a particular story or message youre trying to convey? here's just something off the top of my head picking up from after "sirens-":

Stop trying to keep control,

Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,

Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,

Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,So I'll let the roses wilt,

sorry, I'm not amazing with lyrics lol

also maybe number the verses and make a chorus so it flows easier, most songs have a chorus that has a "catchy" melody and repeats a few times throughout the song, sometimes with little changes in lyrics.

it's not necessary (some songs don't have it) but just a suggestion :)