Question

hello
please help me I have to write the formula of the presentation by saying firstly I talk about the historical context from the description to finish the conclusion
it's for my oral English thank you
this is tomorrow and correct my mistakes
and click on the seal piece

Answer 1

I believe that you should just check your spelling , capitalize some I's and the word January .

You should also give more detail about the  Sunday event.
When you say the word conclusion I begin to think about a short paragraph / summary , this means you should bring the reader in , draw my attention to your mint idea.

I really hope that I'm helping you , :)