The advertisement stated that you are looking for volunteers for your summer wildlife program. The summer wildlife program sounds pretty cool.
What weakness is revealed in this excerpt from Serena Lawrence's cover letter?
A. She gives her personal opinion.
B. She is only looking for volunteer work.
C. She uses a style that is too casual.
D. She says she found a job in an advertisement.
I would say that the answer is C. Simply because she is using words like "pretty" and "cool". While looking for employment, one should sound more proper in order to get a job, regardless if money is made or not.
