Read the paragraph.
I stared up at the blue-tinged moon. The pier was silent except for the soft sound of the water sloshing against the rowboat. The strumming sound of a guitar drifted from the cabin out over the lake. It had been a good summer.
Which word would you circle if you wanted the writer to improve on a
vague word?
A: Strumming
B: Sloshing
C: Blue-tinged
D: Good