Question

Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative. 1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them. What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative? Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative. The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.” In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun. The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.

Answer 1

Answer:

The correct answer is c, "in sentence 3, dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun."

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Answer 2

The problem that needs to be fixed in Dorthea's narrative is Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun (option 3)

In Dorthea's narrative writings, three sentences are identified that speak about her neighbors and her relationship with them.

In the third sentence, there is an error because she uses the word myself to refer to her. However, this word should only be used when an action affects on the same person. For instance:

• I love myself

Additionally, the verb must be conjugated to the first person and not to the third person. According to the above, the pronoun that she should use to correct this error is I to refer to herself and the verb walk. Then the sentence would be:

• Every day, I walk to school with them

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