Question

I believe that Brutus was both a patriot and a betrayer but he was more of a patriot because he did what he thought was necessary to protect his empire even though he killed his own friend in doing so instead of letting the system work itself out but he made sure that Caesar didn't ruin the empire and that is what his main cause was for. What can i say to make this sound better?

Answer 1

I believe you could use more adjectives and more details so instead of ,"I believe that Brutus was both a patriot and a betrayer" you could say,"I believe that Brutus was a proud patriot and a horrible betrayer." Usually when you need to make something sound better your text is lacking in adjectives and more descriptive details. Let me know if this helps.

Answer 2

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We have friends like Brutus, they are called two faced. He's a patriot because he he killed Caesar for the good of Rome and then when he lost and felt like he did all that he could do for Rome, he killed himself (he died for Rome).

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