Dean wrote a restaurant review for his English class that included a funny story about a server he met there. He
wants to revise the essay and submit it to the local newspaper. Which change should Dean most focus on?
including more sensory details so readers feel as if they know the server
including information about the career of the restaurant's head chef
adding details about the types of food offered and restaurant hours
adding a persuasive element to convince readers which is the best dish
