(1) For centuries, armies all over the world have used insects as weapons of war (Stewart, 15-19). According to Stewart, the ancient
Greeks, Romans, and Mayans used bees and wasps against their enemies (15-19). Modem Tanzanians used a similar strategy during
World War I when they attempted to fight off the British (15-19). But stinging insects are not the only bugs that can be weaponized
(15-19). In parts of Central Asia, assassin bugs have been used as instruments of torture.
Source: Stewart, Amy. Wicked Bugs: The Louse that Conquered Napoleon's Army & Other Diabolical Insects. Algonquin Books of Chapel Hill, 2011, p. 22.
What is the issue with the outside source used in paragraph 1?
O Jihae relies on a long quotation to express her viewpoint.
O Jihae fails to cite the outside source that she uses to support her viewpoint.
O Jihae relies on large chunks of paraphrased material instead of trying to offer a viewpoint of her own that might organize or clarify the
material.
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