One of the main reasons why smartphones are essential
tools for today's young people is they provide instant
contact with the larger world. Today's youth crave
connections with the world outside of their immediate
communities. A study by the National Technology
Foundation says so. Another article by a major
smartphone manufacturer says the same. Young adults
like to connect with people who are different than they are.
What feedback would be most helpful feedback to give the writer of this
paragraph?
OA. Use more specific evidence to support the point.
OB. Focus on a defensible topic.
OC. Revise the claim to make it clearer.
OD. Address several counter-arguments in this paragraph.
