Which revision improves the professional tone of the
text?
O Change sentence 1 to: "Cleaning up garbage in the
ocean would be way better for the environment.'
Change sentence 2 to: "A company called the
Ocean Cleanup Project has cleaned up a ton of
ocean garbage."
Change sentence 4 to: "The system consists of a
big screen below it that catches the stuff."
Change sentence 5 to: "Implementing several of
these systems could remove garbage from the
oceans."
