Next, gatherings are allowed during events. The playoffs in sports attract hundreds of people. For example many fans come to watch the Raptors in the NBA playoffs after the regular season because they won the championship in 2019. Second when the Maple Leafs are in the Stanley Cup playoffs it attracts fans. Lastly when Toronto FC are in MLS cup playoffs thousands of fans come to watch because they won the MLS cup in 2017.
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