Can someone rewrite this to sound more professional? Make sure the word "I" or "I'm" is not representative. (It's for a school project)
I'm applying for this job as a Target Sales Associate since my strengths would be an excellent fit in my defense. Some of my skills; and talents are teamwork, leadership, responsibility, and organizational skills. As a very organized person, I believe this would be an incredible profession because I would be good at replenishing shelves and straightening up displays. Because I am a leader, I am good at teamwork because if someone needs help or guidance, I can provide it. However, I can complete projects with exceptional outcomes while maintaining high morale and mutual respect, which is what I do. I'm also a responsible leader since I know how to respond to circumstances maturely and professionally while accomplishing my assigned tasks. I can also reorganize something to improve its functionality or develop a new idea that improves things.
